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New Voices From San Francisco

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As Time Goes By

By Camincha

iUniverse

66 pages

ISBN: 0-595-36275-3

The local author and poet Camincha has published her debut novella. Two Peruvian immigrants, twenty-four-year old Etienne and nineteen-year-old Mimi, meet and fall in love in San Francisco. They marry and soon await the birth of their first child. The 1950s are a time of prosperity in the United States—when young couples, unlike their parents, can dream of getting a piece of the American Dream, including their own homes and cars. Mimi and Etienne, with their three children, dare to embrace this dream—but with painful consequences. As their romantic story unfolds—filled with erotic connotations, surprises, and traumas— Mimi and Etienne try to fit in, learn, and cope in their foreign environment. They also learn how to survive troubles of the body and soul, the passions of the heart, love and betrayal in their marriage, and the pain of doubts and disappointments. As Time Goes By accurately portrays the sights and sounds of the streets of San Francisco and the suburbs provide them with a stage. Mimi and Etienne become much more than characters as they weep with the fog, smile with the sunshine, and flavor their lives with the salty spray of the ocean.

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View? What view?

New to San Francisco, the view of the city extending to the edge of the ocean outside the Porter's, Etienne's landlords, second floor, main bedroom window on Mercedes Street in the Ingleside district, didn't mean a thing to her. What was important and kept Mimi, nineteen, full of questions, expectations, was the view of her life ahead forming in her mind, her heart, her body.

He is so good looking, in Miraflores they might never have met. Their age difference, five years, he would have been around women that would know how to act, how to respond. Mimi had said no to every guy who asked her to go steady. When her best girlfriend asked, why? What are you afraid of, Mimi? He might want to kiss Mimi had answered. When she told Etienne he looked deep into her eyes with curiosity, surprise, disbelieve. You mean ... you've never kissed ...? he exclaimed.

It is very nice, Mimi said to the slight, stooped figure. The grey blue eyes smiled with appreciation that deepened the furrows on her face as she held her gaze on Mimi's brown eyes, moist-carmine-sensuous lips, curly hair glistening in the intense July sun. It hurts to look at so much beauty, energy, sensuality. This exotic teenager. Like a dahlia flower, the woman thought and turned to lead the way out of the room.

MIMI, BILLY AND Willy had made the trip from Perú to Portland on the Yaraví, a ship with several stops, whose precious cargo included raw materials from the mines in the Peruvian mountains. They became best friends. Then the three traveled by Greyhound to California.

Aboard the ship there had been entertaining, informative after dinner sessions where plans, jokes, stories went round and round the table. Mimi mostly just smiled and listened. So much to learn!

One favorite topic was the United States open immigration quota to Perú that inflamed the minds of many, adventurous young and old, to try their luck away from family and friends. But, let's just face it, someone pointed out one evening, USA wants our materia prima, our minerals. That's why they are being so nice to Perú. And of course our politicians are only too happy to sell to them.

On the light side, there were fun snapshot sessions on deck, for which the officers loaned their caps to the girls who coquettishly tipped them over one eye before they smiled at the camera. Boating outings to ports of call. Unlimited use of typewriters. Some of the passengers took to writing letters, diaries, poetry. The First Lieutenant offered to teach Mimi how to type.

The First Lieutenant forty-two, slender, dark asked her, you didn't know the officers quarters were different than the passengers? Let me show you. Mimi felt his hand burning hers and took a step back. Gave up his typewriting lessons when she felt his breath burning her neck. Mimi had heard. married has five children. Regular "Don Juan."
 

Mimi's father had instructed her to go to the Peruvian Consulate in San Francisco soon as she arrived and to keep in touch with them: If anything happens to you they will notify me right away. Give this letter to the Consul, Lizardi. Him and I were best friends when we were at the Peruvian Embassy in La Paz. Mimi dutifully went to deliver his letter. Mimi, Billy and Willy walked into the suite on Montgomery Street. A receptionist escorted them to an office where a young diplomat, the Cultural Attaché, got up from his desk to greet them. The handsome red-head, smiled, Good afternoon.

Mimi, all bright eyes, pearly teeth, exuding animal energy, smiled at him: Hello, good afternoon I am here to see the Consul. Sparks flew between them. Never finished the sentence. Surprised, pointed to a silver-framed photo on his desk and exclaimed, those are the Morellis.

I am Morelli. They are my parents, handsome, redhead answered, smiling amused.

They live around the corner from my house. Mimi insisted, amazed. She had just left Miraflores and here was someone who used to live around the block from her!

What street?

Juan Fanning. Mimi smiled.

Right! Right! We live in Colón.

A bond was born between them.

The magic had spread to Billy and Willy. They smiled, a conspiratorial look in their eyes.

Handsome had taken in the bright eyes and sensuous lips. Smiling, his light brown eyes set on Mimi, he let the sparks go right through him. That moment frozen in time became theirs forever. Later he would say to her: I treasure the memory of the girl you were that afternoon. Years later he would add, why can't you be that girl for me now?

Handsome became her first date. Taught her to dance, taught her to kiss, to enjoy sex, to want sex. How to use her body to please a man. To whisper sweet nothings while playing with his earlobe to make him want her. With him, Mimi became a woman.

ROSITA HAPPENED TO Mimi the way things happen when you are nineteen with all your tomorrows ahead and all you have to do is just be. And they became friends.

In the Yaraví, a fellow passenger had spoken of a friend and told Mimi: when you get to San Francisco call him he knows a lot of people. She called him.

Yes. I know a family you can rent a room from, he said.

The rented flat at Pacific and Kearny was then occupied by Mimi, Lorena and Teddy, Rosita and her husband, and John. John, who didn't talk to anyone but Rosita. Ever. If you passed him in the hallway would look down at the floor and go silently on his way. Below their home a bakery opened its huge metal doors at three in the morning. And the fog horns could be heard all night long.

Life at Rosita~s was less restricted than at Mimi's parents. Mimi. In fact she must have put in a good word for her to her husband a morose, taciturn man who was seen around the house but hardly heard. He didn't have to. He just muttered his wishes to his wife of thirty years and they were done. But Rosita didn't ordered, she suggested.

He has a car? iOh niña! that is not so good. No. Cars are dangerous to young people. You find yourselves in odd positions. Mimi didn't understand. Didn't ask. She felt uncomfortable. Threatened. How would Rosita know? She had never owned one.

THE NIGHT OF Mimi's date the plump, moonfaced, kind Rosita, hair freshly braided, cheeks red bright apples forgot to be assertive. Four feet tall she smiled up at Etienne with that mix of coquetry and shyness learned from the women in her family. To Etienne she gave her own brand of welcoming, bright stars shining in her eyes, hands nervously twisting the edge of her apron, voice suddenly low and pleading. Good thing he spoke Spanish she had never learned English.

Pero una tacita de café antes de irse, Señor... sólo una tacita ¿si?

Please, call me Etienne, his smile radiated appreciation.

Etienne. She savored the name like it was candy and smiling looked at him sideways before walking back to the stove.

It was Mimi's first date. Her father would never have allowed it. She is only nineteen, Mimi could hear him say.

 

Copyright © 2006 Camincha

Also by Camincha on SoMa Literary Review:

Warmbodies, Suburbia, Hope and Justice, The Sorcerer & Pussy cat, pussy cat

Camincha is from Miraflores, Lima, Perú. Calls the United States her second home and keeps close to her roots for she feels that "it is much easier to get where you want to go when you are proud of where you come from." Earned her M.A. in 1987 in Spanish Literature at San Francisco State University. Was selected by KDTV for their segment "One of Ours" to honor her contributions to the Latin American community in the Bay Area. Her poems, short stories and translations have been published in English and Spanish on Lit & E-Zine magazines. And has desktop published three chapbooks. The San Francisco Bay Guardian says: "Camincha frames the ordinary in a way that makes it extraordinary, and that is real talent."

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